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Pictures from the Bay!
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Pinnipeds at Pt. Reyes National Seashore!




Kel and yrs. truly face the icy blast from the Golden Gate en route to Alcatraz!




I get arty: Evening Sky from Alcatraz, with Pelicans, Venus, Crescent Moon and Western Gull




Dixon and Kelly cavort on the shore of the Bay.




Classic tourist shot of the Palace of Fine Arts




One of the murals at the Marina Motel




The best thing about San Francisco: it's so easy to get around...

2:48 AM
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Ah, Saturday morning. Sure, there aren't any cartoons on, but I'm here with a bowl of cereal, a cup of coffee, and a few hours while Kel's at work and the kids are asleep, so let's chat a bit about San Francisco, shall we?

I first saw SF in the summer of 2004, when I was in L.A. for the BookExpo America and was offered a ride up to the Bay Area for a party being thrown by one of my Readerville buddies for a bunch of my other Readerville buddies. While I was there, I stayed with Ken, my friend since junior high, as well as visiting with his sister Nan and her family, but I only got into the city for one day, hopping a Cali train from Palo Alto to the stop near Balco Park (or whatever it's called this week). From there, I walked up Third Street, passing the Moscone Center and SFMOMA, crossed Market into Chinatown, had a good cheap Vietnamese lunch, strolled down Columbus toward the TransAmerica Pyramid and was immediately sucked into City Lights Bookstore (which didn't carry The Verb 'To Bird', dammitall.) Then I walked back down the hill to the train station and headed back down the peninsula for dinner with Ken.

All told, I couldn't have been in the city for more than five hours, but one thing became apparent immediately: that Kelly would love this place. She's energized by cities in a way that I'm not, finding the press and variety of humanity deeply appealing. She also dearly loves the opportunities for examining the works of humanity, whether in museums, theaters, or shop windows. SF was full of all these things, but there is also a palpable sense of civic pride; you get the feeling everyone there knows they could be somewhere else less interesting, and they do their best to provide the small touches that make the city attractive, whether it's commissioning a mural, tending a flowering plant, or setting a water dish out on the sidewalks for the dogs of passersby. You get the feeling that people there enjoy the presence of other people, which is not a sensation you always get in New York or D.C.

Of course, I liked it too, which made me think this would be an ideal spot for a vacation with the family, so I immediately started making vague plans for our trip there--plans which kept running into conflicts with scheduling and/or funding. Once it became obvious that we wouldn't make it out to Cali in 2006, I sat down with Kelly and planned out a savings strategy and blocked out some time during which we WOULD be going to SF. To my surprise, we saved enough money AND found a free week, which is how we ended up heading to Oakland Airport on JetBlue two weeks ago today.

We spent most of Saturday getting settled into our lodgings at the aforementioned Marina Motel, which were wonderful. We had a two-room suite: a bedroom with a king and two windows (allowing for a wonderful cross-breeze at night) and a kitchenette/living room with a sofa bed where the boys set up shop. We also had a beautifully tiled bathroom whose shower stall had a window looking into the back garden; it was frosted for the sake of delicacy, but you could open the window during a hot shower and feel a cool breeze on your skin.

The kitchenette, equipped with fridge, gas stove, sink, microwave, and coffeemaker, allowed us the luxury of eating a few cheap meals, which was a financial help. The room rates (we paid $155 per night for Saturday & Sunday nights, $135 per night for the next three nights) were also a big help in that regard. The living room's front windows, which looked down into the Marina's cobbled courtyard, were almost but not completely covered by the brilliant blooms of what must have been the world's largest bougainville, and if the wind was up and we opened the windows, petals actually blew into the room. All in all, we were pretty comfy.

I'll tell you about Sunday's trip to Point Reyes (and a few other odd bits of birding) in another post, except to say that the first time I crossed the Golden Gate Bridge it was too fogbound to be seen. In fact, the fog was a fairly consistent part of the Golden Gate experience; we didn't see either of the bridge's towers until Wednesday, despite the fact that the Marina is located only about five blocks from the Palace of Fine Arts and easily within sight of the bridge. The rest of the sky was sunny and clear, but that around the Golden Gate remained hidden in an intriguing variety of mists, fogs, and clouds.

Even when we sailed out to Alcatraz on Monday evening, bundled and layered in every article we had, we couldn't see through the gray to spot the bridge. We could see that the sun was setting in that general direction, yes, but somehow the biting wind that roiled out of the west was doing absolutely nothing to clear away the mists. The island itself is fascinating--a wonderful mixture of scenic grandeur (you can see the WHOLE FREAKIN' BAY from out there, after all), natural variety (there are thousands of seabirds roosting there every evening--mostly Western Gulls and cormorants), historical depth (from the Spanish explorers to the Civil War soldiers to the American Indian occupiers), and of course the sheer mesmerism of blood and death. It's basically America's version of the Tower of London.

The audio tour is great, giving you tales of the prison from the people who were there in their own voices: guards and prisoners both tell you about life on the Rock, about the day-to-day routine and the intermittent variations from it--the bloody "Battle of Alcatraz" and the assorted escape attempts. Admittedly, I turned off my headphones and sneaked out into the open air a few times to do a little birding and hope for the wind to clear away the fog around the bridge, but though I spotted a Brandt's Cormorant or two among the many Double-Cresteds, I still couldn't spot a single cable on the bridge. Even after night fell, and we were treated to a beautiful crescent moon approaching Venus in the west, clouds remained clinging to the bridge like wool around a barbed-wire fence.

Tuesday we hit SFMOMA, which was the one thing Kelly had Insisted On Very Pointedly when we were planning the trip. Personally, I like art museums, and I often particularly enjoy modern art because I feel more capable of evaluating it. With, say, Renaissance art, there's a whole vocabulary of which I'm ignorant, not only in terms of the techniques, but of the culture; I don't always recognize the narratives being referenced, or the symbols being applied. (Did you know that the bagpipes in Bosch's Garden of Earthly Delights triptych symbolized Bosch's homosexuality? I sure wouldn't have known it just from looking at the painting in the Prado.) With modern art, however, I don't have these "translation" problems, and I can usually feel a connection with the artist--or if I don't, I feel comfortable blaming the artist, rather than my own ignorance, which is what really matters to any critic.

The main exhibit was on Matisse, primarily his sculpture; it featured his pieces, as well as his preliminary sketches and models, as well as sculptures and paintings by the artists who influenced him and those whom he influenced in turn. After a long while examining the show, I decided that I was much fonder of the work of Cezanne and Rodin than I was of Matisse's appreciations of them, and the only Matisse pieces I found truly inspiring were his late-career colored-paper collages. Somehow the forms that he rendered in 2-D were more attractive, more intriguing, than those in 3-D.

The best thing in the museum, though, was Felix Schramm's enormous installation entitled "Collider." Stretching through three separate galleries--or perhaps including walls that make it LOOK like it stretches through multiple galleries--it's a gigantic mass of drywall, paint, and wallpaper, arranged in vaguely cubicle-shaped compartments. It looks as though part of a building somehow got blasted or dropped into MOMA. The shattered walls loom out over the viewer, askew, their ragged ends sharply contrasting the regular perpendicular arrangement of the "wreckage," and if you duck under them, you'll see what's painted or pasted to the walls themselves, which may offer surprises. It's a strange and unique combination of the beautiful, the menacing, and the unexpected.

On Wednesday we journeyed by bus to Haight-Ashbury, where we found fascinating murals, a variety of freaky shops, and the most awe-inspiring store I've seen in years: Amoeba Music. Located in a former bowling alley, this CD/DVD store has a selection that outdoes pretty much any other place I've been. New and used discs are available, and titles and artists that simply don't turn up in other stores may turn up in multiple bins at Amoeba. I tried to hit everything on my mental list of hard-to-find artists--Rupert Hine, the Swimming Pool Q's, and Henry Badowski weren't there, alas--and actually came away with a few gems. I located the Leonard Cohen tribute album I'm Your Fan, which features John Cale's definitive version of "Hallelujah"--the one that appears in Shrek, but is replaced on the soundtrack album by a Rufus Wainwright version. I snagged a copy of the soundtrack to the early-80s ska celebration film Dance Craze, which includes not only some dynamite Specials tracks, but live versions of two Bad Manners songs ("Lip Up Fatty" and "Inner London Violence") that I've been jonesing for ever since I played them with Rohrwaggon. And I finally tracked down the Knitters' first album, Poor Little Critter on the Road, whose title track has been embedded in my brain for two decades. Ian found a copy of Nirvana's Incesticide, Dixon found a Buzzcocks collection, and Kelly picked up Morphine's The Night, and I, uh... well, I found another CD or two... or, well, six, really... but I didn't pay more than ten bucks for any of them, and two were only $1.99 apiece!

I could have dropped a whole paycheck there with ease if only I hadn't been thinking "You have to CARRY these things!" the entire time.

Wednesday, our last full day in SF proper, dawned with our first real rain. It wasn't much more than a drizzle, but my attempt to bird on the nearby grounds of the Presidio was hampered by the weather to some degree. After a while, I decided to go downhill and see if things improved. Crossing under a freeway, I found myself at the edge of a long stretch of water--a tidal pool with a grassy embankment on the far side--that actually bordered the Bay. A sidewalk ran along the pool, so I followed it down (spotting a lifer--Heermann's Gull--on a sandbar) and discovered that I was on the edge of Crissy Field, a former airfield now returned to the wild. Joggers, dog-walkers, and cyclists were the main inhabitants at the moment, but as the rain let up a bit, I also saw a pair of Pied-billed Grebes, a Snowy Egret, and a beautiful Long-billed Curlew (which I thought was a lifer at the time, forgetting that I had seen one many years ago in NC). I also realized that Crissy Field would be the perfect place to see the Golden Gate Bridge if only the fog would lift, and I decided to bring the family down if the afternoon were sunnier.

Sure enough, the fog started to lift around lunchtime, so I hauled Kelly and the boys to the waterside. Once we arrived, Dixon and Kelly decided to put their feet in the Bay, since it was their first trip to the Pacific. It was freezing, and Dixon soaked his shoes, but they had fun. Ian and I chose to sit on the concrete steps running down to the Bay and stay dry--I'd swum in the Pacific before, and he was interested in photographing our surroundings. We caught a glimpse of the nose of a sea lion, but it quickly submerged and swam away. The sun had been shining throughout the walk, but it was only after a patient wait that the Bridge finally revealed itself to us: far, far closer than we'd believed, stabbing high into the misty blue with two enormous blades of orange. There were other moments of greater sheer beauty on this trip, perhaps, and some that offered us more profound views of humanity or nature, but somehow sitting on the concrete steps at Crissy Field, watching with my family as the Golden Gate finally came out of the fog, is the moment I'll think of most fondly: the sublime moment when the natural world and the human-built world were both shown to the four of us in their best possible light.

So--next time I'll tell you about Point Reyes, seeing my old girlfriend again, and visiting Oakland. Oh, and hats. Really, really big hats. Be ready.

3:03 PM
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Twelve and a half new birds logged:
*Pigeon Guillemot
*Common Murre
*Pelagic Cormorant
*Brandt's Cormorant
*Black Oystercatcher
*White-winged Scoter
*Band-tailed Pigeon
*Red-masked Parakeet
*Pygmy Nuthatch
*Heermann's Gull
*Long-billed Curlew
*Western Grebe
*"Gambel's" (White-crowned subspecies) Sparrow

Nine CDs purchased from Amoeba Music:
*The Jazz Butcher Conspiracy/1982-1986: Draining the Glass
*The Knitters/Poor Little Critter on the Road
*They Might Be Giants/Miscellaneous T
*Original Soundtrack/Dance Craze
*Various Artists/I'm Your Fan: The Songs of Leonard Cohen
*Various Artists/Beat the Retreat: Songs by Richard Thompson
*Metallica/Load (for $1.99)
*Sting/The Dream of the Blue Turtles (also for $1.99)
*Berlin Philharmonic with Herbert von Karajan/Beethoven Symphonies 5 & 6

Four Asian cuisines sampled:
*Thai
*Japanese
*Burmese
*Nepalese

Six friends visited:
*Nan
*Maggie
*Marcy
*Steve
*Karen
*Meg

Four new friends met:
*Lynn
*Leah
*Yvonne
*Noelle

Seven national parks and monuments visited:
*Point Reyes National Seashore
*Alcatraz
*Crissy Field
*The Presidio
*Golden Gate Bridge
*Aquatic Park
*Muir Woods

Yes, we're back from a week on and around San Francisco Bay. Details to follow. But in the meantime, if you're looking for a place to stay in SF, let me link you to the charming and surprisingly affordable Marina Motel, located on Lombard Street within six blocks of the Palace of Fine Arts. You'll be glad you clicked.

5:57 PM
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My marriage is now old enough to drink.

"Old enough" doesn't necessarily mean "able," however, because American drinking laws are baffling things. For example, I found out yesterday about a provision of the 21st Amendment (the repeal of Prohibition) that I hadn't known about: it specifically repeals the 18th Amendment, but it allows states and territories to prevent the importation of alcohol if they so desire it. I guess I'd known counties could be dry, but it hadn't occurred to me that their right to be so was framed in the Constitution.

When I was growing up, North Carolina (and many other states) allowed you to buy at least some forms of alcohol at 18; we could legally obtain beer and wine at that age, though we had to wait until age 21 to buy liquor. Since I was growing up in a college town, however, the rules were pretty loose; practically anyone who looked more or less college-aged was assumed to be a student and therefore was able to buy beer. (I drank wine only rarely in those days--still do, as a matter of fact.) I hit 5'8" when I was 14, and looked basically collegiate from about 15 on, so I did my share of underage beer runs in high school. (Our brands of choice: Stroh's, if we could get it; Black Label if we were short on cash; Red, White & Blue or PBR if we were really short on cash.)

It also helped that beer and wine are available in grocery stores in NC, and the clerks at Fowler's or Food Lion were unlikely to feel pressure to card you when they had hundreds of other things to ring up. To get liquor, you had to go to the ABC store; that's "Alcoholic Beverage Control" for those of you outside the Tar Heel State. Most of the other states I visited had similar laws, though South Carolina's ABC stores are identified to this day not with the legend "ABC," but with a large red dot.

Once I hit 21--which I did while I was in England, where you can buy liquor at 18--I assumed that my freedom to purchase and consume alcohol would never again be worth thinking about. I was wrong about this, as I discovered on my first (and so far only) trip to Missouri.

I suppose it's basic provincialism, but I'd have to say that other states have what I would have to regard as deeply weird rules about obtaining alcohol. In Missouri, I was going through the grocery store, picking up crackers, condiments, milk, etc., when I brought the cart around the corner and discovered to my astonishment that I was in the Liquor Aisle. Bottle after bottle, Bombay Sapphire, Johnny Walker Red, Drambuie, Grand Marnier, Stoly and Cutty and Beam, oh my. Just like the cereal. Bourbons were positioned roughly like the Kellogg's offerings, vodkas like the General Mills, liqueus like the Quaker Oats... It was nearly 20 years ago and I still haven't gotten over it.

My trip to Pennsylvania last month, however, offered a fresh look at the absurdities of local alcohol laws. My brother and I drove off to get a twelve-pack of beer for the weekend. It was about nine miles to the nearest grocery store, but we figured it was worth the trip. When we arrived, however, we discovered that Ahart's Market did not stock beer. Or wine. Or any sort of alcohol at all. Right next door was a "Wine and Spirits" store, which may or may not have been affiliated with Ahart's, but it sold only wine and spirits--no beer. The Ahart's stocker we approached looked at us, puzzled, as if we should expect beer to be unobtainable at a grocery store, and told us that we could get beer at a store a few more miles down the road, so we thanked him and headed off.

We arrived at the Beer Store and found the aisles--I use the term loosely--pallets and stacks and pyramids of beer, all of it in cases (24 beers, for you teetotallers) or packs of thirty. Dave and I looked through the mountains of Coors Light and Bud with disdain, then dug through the microbrews with some interest, selecting a six of pale ale and a six of wheat beer from a pair of open cases and preparing to visit the register.

"You can't break those up," said a voice suddenly. A clerk was watching us.

"They're already broken up," we said.

"We can't sell them to you except in the cases," he replied.

Baffled at the existence of the open cases, from which no beer could ever be sold, we nonetheless opted to pick up a variety case of six Sam Adams brews: Boston Lager, Pale Ale, Light, Summer Ale, Cherry Wheat, and Wheat Beer. They all turned out to be good, but of course we drank only about ten of them, and I had to bring the other fourteen bottles home to Virginia, where the liquor laws make at least some kind of sense to me.

Well, as much sense as any current laws that tell an American he can vote, marry, be sentenced as an adult, and fight and die for his country, but not pop a cold one to celebrate his anniversary.

To those of you who just turned twenty-one: Cheers.

To those of you who just turned eighteen: you may want to think about how you use that vote. Good luck.

4:19 PM
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I've heard it said that a dissertation is never finished--it's just due. That may be what's happening to the latest draft of The Amazing Q. After spending several weeks agonizing over what amounts to a reordering of a single chapter (and the addition of one lengthy sequence within that chapter), I was pretty close to thinking I was done with it and was preparing to let Kelly give it a read-through. Once she'd signed off on it, I was ready to send it back out.

But then I made a mistake.

I made the mistake of looking back at the last note the editor sent me, and I realized that there was at least one area where I hadn't made much of a change: the opening. I'm starting to think I need to cut it down, so we can get to the adventure proper a little faster. And that means the Savage Red Pencil must come out.

I don't really have a red pencil, since I write primarily on computer, but there's no question that the process of cutting from one's own work feels like exposing a limb to attacking savages, and it's worse because you are the attacking savage.

Still, it's important to remember Kurt Vonnegut's "Advice to Young Writers," a set of seven simple principles which I display in a prominent place on my classroom wall. One part I often point out to my students is Point Four: "Have the guts to cut." In my experience, adolescents are particularly inclined to want to keep every line they've written, often because those lines are heartbreakingly sincere expressions of ideas they have only just now formulated. This makes it hard for a teacher, who might have had this exact same ephiphany while reading Salinger or listening to Pink Floyd one night thirty years before, to persuade the writer that those lines Simply Must Go.

Writers compose in trees, but they must think in forests. If you get overly fond of a particular tree, you can't be much of a forester. It might be a lovely tree, full of healthy leaves and maybe even a colony of cute little squirrels, but there may be good reasons to take it down: maybe it's an invasive species, threatening the overall health of the forest; maybe it's blocking the sunlight for dozens of other trees that produce sweeter or more nutritious fruit; maybe the squirrels are rabid. But whatever the reason may be, at some point, the writer has to pick up his axe, his chainsaw, or whatever metaphor you prefer for the Savage Red Pencil, and cut that sucker.

That's sort of where I am now. I don't want to cut Mary Ellen and Doug, or the whalefish song, or Uncle Ellerbee's Poland China pig, or the Bureau of Missing Persons, but now I'm wondering whether they're casting unwelcome shadows on the later sections of the book.

And when it comes to exposing a limb to attacking savages, maybe it's worth considering that there are times when having a limb severed is actually a good thing--like when it's caught in a trap.

5:28 PM
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No archives have been sighted yet, but I'm confident that we're getting closer.

In the meantime, I've been trying to get the latest draft of The Amazing Q into shape, and I'll admit that Chapter 10 was pretty much kicking my ass. I'd sit at the computer and work through one sequence, only to discover that it didn't match up with the sequence before, or the one after, and I was beginning to despair of fitting all the pieces together.

Then I decided to resort to a tool I used to use all the time: paper.

I wrote down each of the six main events of the chapter on a sheet of notebook paper. Even when I'd been working at the computer, I knew what had to happen first and what had to happen last. Once I had all six down on the same page, however, I suddenly could see that #s 4 and 5 had to be reversed, and moreover that putting them in that order gave #6 a better motivation than the one I'd previously had.

This is one more reason why I believe the "paperless office" is a pipe dream.

11:05 PM
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